Reply #1 is Junior's review of The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe. Thoughts come through clear, but you can see how far Junior has come when expressing his opinions.
Oof, that's... not good. Just goes to show you that practice makes perfect. And studying this stuff in school helps, I guess. Even though I've kinda stopped doing big reviews mostly, at least during the school year, I think my current reviews of that length are, like, infinitely better.